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the perfect night
the perfect dance
the perfect score
the perfect dress
the perfect sky
the perfect words
the perfect girl

and opinion perfect may be
but also the truth
no matter what
you are perfect
the perfect person
everything about you
is perfect

the perfect words
ive found a way
to say
my love for you
beyond anything
that even the perfect words
cannot say
the perfectly unexplainable love
for the perfect girl
you are perfect
no matter what
another says
©2005-2009 ~Tiki-Rongo
:icontiki-rongo:

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resubmitting this about someone else but i had to change the name to resubmit so i added a dot ... lol again i got the title from a friends poem

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:icontestament-butterfly:
:blush: I love this poem, It reminds me of when we frist started going out.. Remember the dance we went to? :blush: I love you...

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With great power comes great ass beatings
:icontiki-rongo:
:blush: aww do you remember last year at the young writers conference when i first let you read it .. :blush:

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7/7/06 - the day half my heart died...

a sandwich is a sandwich....but a manwich is a meal ................................i swear im not gay

intelligence in humans is merely a compensation for the loss of instinct and habit
:icontestament-butterfly:
Yes... I think so, anyway... :BLUSH: :blush: :blush: I love you... :heart: :smooch:

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With great power comes great ass beatings
:icontiki-rongo:
awww i love you too honey :smooch: your so cute

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7/7/06 - the day half my heart died...

a sandwich is a sandwich....but a manwich is a meal ................................i swear im not gay

intelligence in humans is merely a compensation for the loss of instinct and habit

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